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Haiku : The Other World.
Posted 7 months ago by VIRUZXP

Trapped in this real world,

I sought after the other,

A world where everything is possible. 

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VIRUZXP
Jun 13, 2008 02:42AM

@1v1assacre - agreed, just trying out, didn't come out what i expected....

@gamebend - lol, like i said, just trying out, its my first time writting a haiku btw... so im not giving much hope in it...

@CareBearsRevival - yeaaaaaa i did count the syllables, but couldnt think of any suitable word at that time...

1v1assacre
Jun 13, 2008 01:10AM

lol massive fail

gamebend
Jun 12, 2008 05:24PM

do ppl know what haiku's are? or just bad at english? lol

CareBearsRevival
Jun 12, 2008 05:16PM

Um, wanna try counting the syllables again?